Yes, it was strange, but if you read it, you can really picture what's going on. What's going on, and nothing more. It put me in a daze, which was a great effect. Keep it up!

I like it. It's kinda wierd, but good.

I may be going "what the hell?", but I still enjoyed that small piece of prose enough to leave a comment. It was short, sweet, and over-all VERY intriguing. It seems like less of a plot and more of an entire emotion represented through this piece. I have no idea what was going on, and yet am left with an over-all sense of uneasiness. This speaks volumes for your writing skill.