This is just beautiful because there's such honesty in your words that makes me want to know the narrator of your poem because she reminds me a lot of myself. We all have doubts and hopes and dreams and that special someone will never know that. Take care.

Okay. Ireally loved this one. I just plain out love how you wrote it. GREAT WORK!!


Kristie Marie

Aww, it sucks that he doesn't notice you. I love how you end the poem.

SIMPLY LOVE. DAMN YOU.
the last lines.
D A M N . Y O U .

Aw...I like that. I can relate. ^_^