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| Limited Edition 2007-03-03 ch 1,  | abuseThe author's notes are longer than the actual chapter! 90% of it had absolutely nothing to do with the story and well...all of it was unnecessary. Get a livejournal?! There is problem with the grammar and spelling. All in all, I get the feeling that you don't even want to write, both from the notes and the story. The story doesn't even have a style and it...what is it? It's...people throwing paper? Where is the content, the plot? |