I'm so sorry this took so long... but wow... what an ending...

*heads on to The Fall ASAP*

Over and out,

:) CD

Ah. So that's how they found out...
I like this chapter. I can't wait to se some more :)

Ah, so I was right. ...almost. Okay, so I was wrong. Sue me. Anyway, good chapter. Poor Kekasmai...(Well, poor everyone in that place, but they're not the main focus of the story...) Can't wait to read more! :)

Aw! Not cool!...The chapter was great, but ...I really liked Ovak (and that, my friend(s) is my excuse for acting so weird in this review LOL.) Are they going to go after all of Ket's friends? Or just some of them, or what? and how is he going to find out about Ovak, anyway? :) Can't wait to find out how all this turns out! :)

Didn't Cassandra of Troy have a twin brother?

:) CD

I think I can kind of guess who Andras is...but hey, I could be wrong. ...Ket is a little self-centered, but why does he keep fighting with the Miringa? It sounds like they arent exactly saints (well, we KNOW they aren't, but I'll say it again) and he knows it, too. So...what's up with that? I know he wants to kill the Manumos for killing Kyros, but could he not do that on his own? You know--pick them off, quietly, one or two at a time, and go for powerful Manumos when he could? Maybe he doesn't think about that, I don't know. Just curious. :)

Cool I like it keep it up

I don't know about anyone else, but I like spoilers...As long as they don't give away like the whole entire plot. (is that even possible?) Whatever. Good chapter...What'll hapen now? :):) Tschau.

Too late, he's already thinking it.

Oh crap this is gonna be interesting...

:) CD

...wow. Where did you get all your information about the names? ...Just wondering, since I'm interested in names and...yeah.
I've been away for a long time. Good for me, because now I have plenty of chapters to read before I have to wait for another one to come out. :):) Tschau.

There's a song by Bob Dylan called "With God on Our Side". I was reminded of that by this chapter.

It's so sad, because it's not just fiction... wars have been fought for the glory of gods since before the Aztecs. And it's sickening.

:) CD

Kekasmai is right, they DO have a weird relationship. Oh and by the way... doesn't the vision end with the sword moving toward his head? Not actually -striking- his head? hmm...

:) CD

*wince* OOH! De-NIED!!

Yeah, he needed that proverbial kick in the shins.

:) CD

Baldur is the name of one of the Norse gods.

Anyway... it's amazing the difference. They're the same age, and yet Ket is so much older.

:) CD

Do we ever find out what Ayner means?...I mean, we know that Saevyer means Savior and Lackey means something like servant...So yeah.