|Reviews for The Staircase to Eternity|
| Aureate Fading 9/23/08 . chapter 1
I adore this poem! Marvelous job Daedal. ) I'm adding this to my Favorite List! This poem would make a wonderful song. ) Nice job.
Lady of the Mirror
| Laura Elizabeth 3/30/07 . chapter 1
This was great, and I have to say that I find it quite ironic that I was listening to "Stairway yo Heaven" earlier and this reminds me of that :) It was an awesome poem, but I have a suggestion. I think that the word "next" in the last line throws off the rhythm a little bit. But other than that I really like it. Well done!
| The Un-great-ful 3/3/07 . chapter 1
If they're a staircase to eternity, you're in for quite a walk!
Nice rhyming scheme, quatrain is good for that. I like the infinite quality of it, I like to think of eternal powers when writing some of my own stuff.