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| xDancingintheRainx 2007-03-07 ch 1,  | abuseI like this a lot! You worded it perfectly. Thanks for the review! |
| nine iron 2007-03-03 ch 1, | abuseGood idea but maybe seperate the last line up and change so matue to just mature to improve flow and pace of the work. Jus my opinion, Keep up the good work N.I. |