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JulyPie
2008-09-27
ch 3,
That horror movie sounded awesome by the way. Also, am I supposed to like Tristan, cause I don't think I can hate someone named Tristan, the name is just to awesome, it's like trying to hate someone named Englebert (if you hate anyone named Englebert I'm sure you have a very good reason though).
JulyPie
2008-09-27
ch 1,
I am really liking this! I am really liking Jamie's character. Just the little funny lines like 'middle-name deprived' etc. make me like her. Also, random being called James amused me muchly.
The Aquatic Chewbacca
2008-09-01
ch 11,
aw. Corey is too cute. i vote Tristan. or Cory. Not sure, I'd like to see how you go with this. either way, i HATE Dan. what an **. eww.
-tac
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2008-08-24
ch 4,
Truth or Dare? Really? What are they, 7th graders stuck in the early 90's?
qtkemi
2008-08-11
ch 11,
I cant believe dan...That pompous, **-hole bastard! Not only did he drink alcohol and chastise jamie for not doin it, he goes and cheats on her, AND ends their relationship after being best friends for forveer. Not only that, but he ignores her, and what makes it even MORE worse is the fact that jamie could have had a possibly great relationship with that boy-friend of her in 8th grade if Dan( and Jordan, but mostly dan) didn't punch him or whatever and ruin it! The nerve of that guy!
I think corey's a greta person, and i think dan really sucks...but (dont kill me for saying this) I think Jamie and dan belong together...
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Great story btw...it had me roped in from the very beginning...I didn;t want to stop reading it and I wnated MORE MORE MORE ( I still do, mind you)...Please update soon! Im a HUGE fan
-kemi
skyblue909
2008-07-03
ch 1,
"Hey guys, meet my new girlfriend, James" good one! i totally cracked up!
make this mistake
2008-06-01
ch 11,
I'm hoping that you haven't ditched this story because I like it. And things were just starting to get good, too. I want to see more Dan. :)
girl2100
2008-05-27
ch 11,
c'mon!! update! update!
manderschica13
2008-03-13
ch 11,
so, I'm really thinking that you need to update REALLY soon.

It would be really awesome, and we would all love you=]

So... PLEASE?

=]

*kisses*
Mandy
Hakunamattata
2008-03-07
ch 11,
UPDATE!
svmgeleta
2008-02-21
ch 1,
I like it so far!!
funky-gg
2008-02-17
ch 4,
cool story so far !
Ogallybogallyboo
2008-01-09
ch 11,
please let the guy she ends up with be tristan!PLEASE!
I like your story I think there is alittle to much drama, but not enough for me to not like it.It's very good...I don't like Dan, Kyles an okay choice,and I don't like Corey that much.
ashes00
2007-12-24
ch 11,
i luv ur story a lot!
u are a good writer... :D
keep updating!!
SuperCUTEJensen
2007-12-15
ch 11,
I've just read your whole story...i love it...I want to see Jamie and Tristan together...I like him better...hope you update soon!
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