Reviews for An Experiment in Style

Isca 2008-01-09 ch 1,	It wasn't one of my favourites. I am sorry. But, I liked the line "the girl, now a butcher." That was very good. Keep up the good work.
Lana Mira Beth 2007-03-06 ch 1,	This is quite sad, quite hopeless. This is pretty well written, and I like how expressive it is despite its brevity. Nice job. One criticism: some of the sentences dragged a little bit. But, overall this is really good. It's a creative use of an old idea. I like it when that's done. :) And thanks for the review.:)