Reviews for Aster in the Fields of Tryssen

Reviews For: Aster in the Fields of Tryssen

B.S. Ha 2007-04-30 ch 2,	(reviewing as I go...) - "Siying-shen shang"?! The crap?! - ^ oh...okay, then. - did you make up the song? I like it. - Am I arguing with the bush/Bush? Eh, makes sense to me. (pun not originally intended) - I had to look up "ladle"... - what age is "coming-of-age," anyway? (haha, btw) - there are a WHOLE BUNCH o' typos, here... - Sparrathia...haha...who's that supposed to be? if anybody? - "I’ve known women who can ruin entire banquets with a flick of her finger.”...which finger? - “No, she’s not really that horrible, despite the stories. Or, she hasn’t tried to kill me, specifically, yet." Hmm, not that horrible? I dunno...I mean, she doesn't even give out cookies! - Banholf snorted. “You’re wrong about Cook. She has tried to kill you, as the entire household has. But you’re just a resilient little bugger, eh?” - Mnemosyne Organization... - Zadok's "Wine" moment was a Kodak moment...get it? Uhh, nevermind. - Hah! You can HAVE Aelfrinn- what use do I have for a person with that retarded name... - “I knew there was something about that woman”. Which woman? - asbestos? - Wait a minute- why are all MY characters disturbing? Not that there's anything wrong with that, but... - Okay, tell me again how one has black and gold hair? - Ah! Banolf's hair description makes me think Dempsey! - the planets reference again is just so random...keep it up! - "Happy Birthday, your life still isn't over..." - Yes, J, sisters that are only 3 days apart... - "Cook is the older one, but not by much, I don’t think. Anyway, Banholf, who was about a year older than Siying—probably around half a year older, probably older than Cook as well". Thoroughly confused. But whatever, that's the point, right? - I hate her laugh and I've never even heard it. I never want to hear it being described again. - “After I walk out that door, you can flirt all you like.” I totally don't make fun of people like that! Yeah, totally... - I SAID I didn't want to hear it again!! - Tobias is delusional. - (I'm currently listening to a song with the lyrics "I don't want to lose my head today...") - FRAKEN-ROSE!! - “If only the child hadn’t been birthed in the first place—” If ONLY... - “Go change. Imbecile.” - 'Great Queen [of] Fortune, Raven [the] Little Winged One [of] White Mountain [and] Intelligence, [the] Beautiful Rose of Matthinghouste and Tryssen'. Do you know how drunk her parents were when they named her?! - "Siying’s mind went blank for a long moment, in which the Frankenrose was chopped to bits by her spazzing hand." See?! that's what happens when that romance comes in! - “Hello, man I do not really wish to be affiliated with,” Banholf replied, as if he were making a point. Oh wait. “You’re so cold to me,” Ranolf complained. - “Old! I’m not that old.” “Keep wishing, old man.” - HAHAHAHAHAHA! whe... - JESSE IN THE FETAL POSITION! - His grandmother IS ashamed, I'll bet. In Happiness, Your Sister in Mary-Sue-bashing, ~Siying (and Fraken-rose!)
B.S. Ha 2007-04-28 ch 1,	For some reason, this didn't show up in my inbox for Author Alert... Anywho, I'mma reviewing as I read. - Now that I've read that name, I'm gonna name my kid Princess Rianna Othella Ravynna Aleda Yamashiro Akira Min’tharon de Matthinghouste-Tryssen - just to torture her/him (especially if it's a boy). - I love the straightforward tone- it's so funny! - The long, descriptive (run-on) sentences are PERFECTO. - The Japanese names are a bit too random. - "There was no hay in sight, which truly sucked for him." - "Marde"...? Poor boy... - " “His Majesty went back into the castle moments after you arrived, Princess.” [...] "The Prince of Fallowshaith sat cross-legged in front of a window, engrossed in a book, and did not register their entrance." But he just got there...? - I'm still waiting for Banholf's full name... - Tobias - pbftmrhahahahahahahaha! - “Hoy, Your Majesty, are you going to let me in anytime soon? I thought you’d let me in shortly.” I love that change in tone! And anyways, Banny is right! :D - “Quiet, De Hayes, we were about to finish anyway” - WHOOT! Go DE HAYES! - Tobias' parents were high when they named him, and in good humor, weren't they? - "green dress, white apron, wide-brimmed straw hat and heavy boots". Thank you. Just - thank you. (btw, the name is so out of place- not even Japanese!) - Uhh...I went to the kitchen because I needed to borrow knives for the, um, aphids? Yeah! The aphids! And those pesky little rats...wait, I mean Tobias. That little stalker... - Shaanxi? The crap? - "Siying had several argumenta with Cook" Yes, "argumenta..." - "she couldn’t help but feel slightly… endangered… around Siying. It seemed that the woman had slightly violent, cynical tendencies." I love you (as a sister, mind you!) - This is starting to remind me of the Secret Garden, except SG was better... - Thank you for not referring to the tree as an "it." - TEA! - Of course, she just HAS to communicate with the stinkin' cats... - Haha, get it? Cats' outta the bag... - Yes, because Banholf and Siying are distant relatives and thus conspiring together to rid of Mary here and that's why you say they're similar. Right? - FIRE! - Who's Helen supposed to be? Much thanks, ~forest
Shdwphoenix 2007-03-03 ch 1,	Omigosh. XD Parodies = win. You get ten points for naming her pets in Japanese, and a hundred more for Ria's ability to telepathically communicate with them.

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