You make my heart halt

(I believe that is considered assault)

I believe that those are some of the best lines I have ever read on here. Keep up the good work.

SirScott

Ah ha. We have a song! Really nice job.

ARG. FictionPress isn't sending emails again. *beats up FictionPress Web Monkey* It DRIVES ME NUTS.

(Did I mention it drives me nuts?)

Anyhow, lovely song.

Rowan.

I loved the rhyme scheme here! It's very original (and heart felt) the chorus is great (if not slightly overused) but I really dug this song/poem. It's a really good read! One more complaint though, all the lines on all the verses rhyme except the last two of the first stanze, thought that was odd. But I really liked this one! Keep writing!

Awe, this was so cute and kinda sad. I loved it. Very well written.