  Supercat 2009-01-22 . chapter 1 Woo! That was cool. Gonna write more? |
| CoCo 2007-07-23 . chapter 4 Nice! |
  teardropsONroses 2007-07-17 . chapter 4meh
meh
meh
meh!
poor Maria!
write more!
yay |
 Gumbear 2007-07-13 . chapter 4whii... what's gonna happen? |
 SuperCUTEJensen 2007-07-11 . chapter 4interesting story...i like it..I cant wait to see what happens next...hope you update soon |
| voileib 2007-07-11 . chapter 4 nonii... eesti keeles siis... asi kisub põnevaks ja hästi kirjutatud ja... põnev, kaasahaarav, :D inglise keelt räägid ka hästi, mu ema küsis, et kes see teil nii hästi inglise keelt paneb? Jah, just nii ta ütles, ära mõtle vasakule :D |
| Gumbear 2007-07-10 . chapter 1 lahe jutt, hihi täiega seebikas kah, aga igav pole ;) |
| voileib 2007-07-09 . chapter 3 interesting story...waiting for part 4 and new part 1 :) |
| Vinnie 2007-07-07 . chapter 3 This is good! You have some mistakes but they aren't so big so they could really bother me. Update soon |
| Liivi 2007-07-07 . chapter 3 Sisu on hea. Kuid siin-seal leidub kirjavigu, mõndades kohtades puuduvad komad. Sõnakordusi on ka üpris palju, kuid siiski tahaksin teada, mida Sa edasi kirjutad :).
Jään järge ootama. |
| teardropsONroses 2007-07-01 . chapter 3 What. happens. next? write more! |
 JemKay 2007-06-28 . chapter 3Wow! cool story... that fernando guy is way freaky! |
| käps 2007-03-13 . chapter 2 (Y) |
| Ka Yang 2007-03-12 . chapter 2 The first 2 chapters are very good and interesting. Keep up the good work. And hopefully I get to read the rest of it soon. |
| teardropsONroses 2007-03-11 . chapter 2 Ohh, ooh, ooh! What happens next? |
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