Aw, babe... *is sad for you* =(

Wow...wonder what inspired that. See good things can come of akward situations :P still awsome poem

hm wonder who this is about. -thinks- anywho tis good.

Great control over the momentum of this piece, shows real thought in the writing, it uses a little bit of rhyme to do this but also with word choice when rhyme is not present.

Well done and keep writing