good essay, it found it to be vague, but that lets the reader imagine and interpret it in their own way. good work, i tried reviewing other pieces of your work, but my computer was being retarded and kept disconnecting me.
Simfreak1

that was nice
:)

Firstly, what you wrote was So true! I lurve my friends...

Anyway, more grammar errors but nothing epic. A good read through after you're finished writing will fix some of these. I can't promise it'll fix all cuz no matter how many times I read through there's always ANOTHER mistake someone else has to point out. But anyway, good work otherwise.

Keep it up,
zell.

Great topic. I really love the definitions at the end.
Keep writing.
~**~Indiana~**~