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| Simfreak111 2007-09-08 ch 1,  | abusegood essay, it found it to be vague, but that lets the reader imagine and interpret it in their own way. good work, i tried reviewing other pieces of your work, but my computer was being retarded and kept disconnecting me. Simfreak1 |
| iheartcarebears 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abusethat was nice :) |
| zello818 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abuseFirstly, what you wrote was So true! I lurve my friends... Anyway, more grammar errors but nothing epic. A good read through after you're finished writing will fix some of these. I can't promise it'll fix all cuz no matter how many times I read through there's always ANOTHER mistake someone else has to point out. But anyway, good work otherwise. Keep it up, zell. |
| Abysmal Tr3pidation 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat topic. I really love the definitions at the end. Keep writing. ~**~Indiana~**~ |