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Smidojuice 2007-12-09 ch 36,	abusebahaha amazing. hot guy shoulda lived though. did he like her or what? or was he just ** insane? its hard to tell the difference sometimes.
Kar3b3ar 2007-11-04 ch 35,	abusehm this reminds me of battle royale or of a picture of a little girl with a smile on her face and blood dripping down.
Experiment 156-SKYE 2007-07-01 ch 35,	abusei liked this alot. But...very depressing ending.
J.R. Miller 2007-06-27 ch 1,	abuseThis story had it's fair share of occasional spelling and grammatical errors, but other than that it was a great story! I especially loved the ending, with the whole part about life being a game. I really enjoyed the story and hope to see more work from you in the future!
Arick Payth 2007-06-19 ch 36,	abuseGreat story, I really loved it. I love the ending, too. It's not cliche' like a alot of stories. But to be truthful, I kind of liked Irene.
Mass Genocide 2007-06-14 ch 36,	abuseI just want to say that it had a most unexpected ending; I loved it. Although, I'm a sucker for happy endings so, it did make me kinda sad to see Chris Chloe and Sacha go... Oh well... But wow, it was a great story, I really think you should publish it. Really. I can't wait to read your next story. email me when it's up K? Mass Genocide P.S, Great Story, I LOVED it.
MercX 2007-06-13 ch 36,	abuseWow, this story was amazingly good! It kept me reading until the end. Excellent excellent mood and characters. Great job!
LeenaAmara 2007-06-11 ch 36,	abuseSHE LIVES! Actually...I saw that coming, but I liked the very end of it, 'life is game' is a good way to sum up everything that happened. Very nice.
xoxo1 2007-06-11 ch 36,	abusesounds great let me know when the new story is up
Miss Pookamonga 2007-06-11 ch 36,	abuseI'd love to know when the next story will be up! And you're welcome for the reviews; I really did enjoy your story. :D Luv, Miss Pookamonga ;-P
Miss Pookamonga 2007-06-10 ch 35,	abuseInteresting ending...a lot like Lord of the Flies (which I mentioned in my other review), actually. It's sad what she did, especially considering she's still just a girl, which you very poignantly pointed out in the paragraph that says, "This little girl had probably been through more in a few days than most people do in a lifetime. And she was still so small." But, then there's the whole paradox at the end--she killed them, but they're still going to live thru her. Strange, sad, but powerful. I don't know if you intended what I'm reading into it, but this story definitely holds a lot to be read between the lines. Great job! Luv, Miss Pookamonga ;-P
Miss Pookamonga 2007-06-10 ch 34,	abuseWow...I was not expecting that... Really sad, y'know, how the worst things can seem the best things to us--when we make evil look good and good look evil. And then, eventually, even the best of us turn into monsters, because we don't know what's right anymore. Like Lord of the Flies. Luv, Miss Pookamonga ;-P
C.Sabbadin 2007-06-10 ch 35,	abuseDid they even look for other people? I never like endings so I can't critique you on it...
Zutara Livs On 2007-06-10 ch 35,	abuseOoh, that was an awesome end to the story. I'm not sure how I see Kate now: selfish or caring? Still grasping the idea that everyone else is dead. I really didn't expect it to end with everyone dying, but it fits now, y'know? Anyway, awesome story. The ending, I mean like the last few sentences were really great. A perfect way to end the story. "Life was a game, was it? A tiny smile tugged at her lips. She had won." Pure awesomeness. A nice, somewhat dark end to the whole thing. I'll definitely be on the lookout for more of your works, you capture characters and emotions perfectly. I really hope I'll be able to see your talents in another story, soon! ~Jelly Bean
xbluxmoonx 2007-06-10 ch 35,	abuseO__O she's gone crazy! omg, that was a great ending! of course, a little demented that she killed her friends and all those other ppl, but- but, :-( oh, how sad. that was a great ending though! i love your writing and everything and i wonder- will you make a sequel? i'm not sure what it would be about, but meh. lol. :-D you kept us guessing until the end and that's what makes a great horror (and thriller) story. ^_^ xbluxmoonx

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