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| George O' Bradbury 2007-11-20 ch 1,  | abuseGreat story! But come on...Ariadne is just as bad as Aphrodite!... :) |
| Malinna 2007-09-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseUh...it's good and all, but I think your story's a little off. Pasiphae and Minos did have alot of kids, but Ariadne was DEFINITELY not the most beautiful. Her sister Phaedra was. Ariadne didn't have to ask Daedulus for help, her mother and her Aunt, Circe were all enchantresses, and legend says that she was the one that made the yarn magic to give it to Theseus. When they reached the island after Theseus had slew the Minotaur, Theseus abandonned Ariadne to marry her sister, Phaedra, who was supposed to be marrying Theseus's friend. Ariadne was really heartbroken...well, at least until she got married to Dionysus. But anyway, great story...you might want to lengthen it. Malinna |
| luneress 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseOH! so sad, but so good. wonderful writing. |
| Faith Lee 2007-04-05 ch 1, | abuseWow. A little depressing, but a nice twist. |
| EverlastingBliss 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abusestupid Dionysus! *Cries* so sad... |
| Arilabrys 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseWow. What a twist you gave it! Ariadne leaving Theseus! Very nice indeed. |
| Rawk-Chick 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuse:cries: It is so sad. Nicely done. Thanks for reading mine! |
| A.J Evans 2007-03-07 ch 1, | abuseSorry I havent reviewed before today, my FP has really been playing about so i havent received any alerts. Great story. Just alittle light reading before bed!I really love the Greek myths. they're so gritty. I would love for you to expand on this one further. |
| Gregory O'Loomis 2007-03-07 ch 1, | abuseI love it! ;) |