i knew he would turn out great and now i want more! CP

Aw, I feel bad for Maria but I also love Finn. He seems like such a sweetheart. And Chennai reminds me of a friend of mine so she's very easy to like:). Your characters are very believable and the conversations flow perfectly. I can't wait for an update and see how everything turns out!

Oh, I loved the beginning! Especially the ending line. Priceless. I could just picture Maria's face haha. I'm going to read more (just thought I should let you know the beginning caught my attention)

I like this one. Schools are tough, but marriage?! Dang. I liked that the characters liked each other. It's rare, but a funny, and cute way to meet. I'm anxious to see where their relationship goes! ;)

Excellent story you've got here. It's amazing. The plot's solid, and you've got strong, well-developed characters. Good job, and I can't wait for more!

~carm~

This is really good and interesting. I really like it! :) Update soon!!

goodododododododod i like it.

You have to update! really really soon!

Oh, if I were Maria, I would be so angry I would just throw a tantrum no matter how old I was. This wasn't a bad story, but I think that because you wrote it in present tense it seems to move a little fast. (Present tense, just in case you haven't heard the term before, would be things like "He smiled" instead of "smiles" or "laughed" instead of "laughs".) Occasionally you even jump from present to past tense for one or two sentences then go back to normal. Still, the plot seems like it could really work out well, especially since you can foreshadow the romance and humor ahead that you've categorized this story as.

And finally, I apologize for asking and probably sounding dumb, but here in America I've never heard this before. What does "gaff" mean? ("He’s never gaff and when he is here he takes charge of everyone’s lives.")

~Cirien Phoenix

P.S. Thanks for reviewing "Vampyr Prince." I'm glad you really like the story, it was written as a gift for someone so I did my best with it.

i like it keep writing adn thanks for reveiwing my story and a new chapter is going up tommorrow
cp

so Maria now in oz oops I mean Aureate. hehehe
good job. Update soon!

wow, i like this! hope you update soon. it's great.