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| concerto49 2007-08-03 ch 1,  | abuseIt is rather negative. "I’ll kill your happily ever after." - you Um as to the title - Love Paranoia? It was cool. Anyhow. Cheers. |
| BloodRidden.Snow. 2007-03-05 ch 1, | abuseinteresting... i liked it and i usually don't like rhyming poems well yea for the name idk here's a long one "every road you've lead me too" or "every road that leads from you" whatever only because it seems that the person your talking about in the poem lead to pain i guess i'm not good at titling work other than my own |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2007-03-05 ch 1, | abuseWow alot of anger. But I loved how you wrote it. As for the title I have no idea. Good luck with it though. Keep writing! |
| Wir1wind0001 2007-03-04 ch 1, | abusewow...i really like this poem...not really the hostillity thoguh...but good job! im really impressed! |