This was nice. The poem had a soft flow, and had great imagery words. You know what would be cool, if you constructed the poem as a concrete one, like in the shape of a tear! ]

As soon as I figure out what I want to put up here I will. I start stories, and never finish them. That's why I resort to mainly poetry, but there are a few I haven't finished... o well.

] thanks for the welcome!

"Forever a/Distinguished mark/on the/Blank world."

That is such a beautiful image!

I enjoyed this poem. I thought it had a sad yet true ring to it.

Write On.