Reviews for A Lover's Lament - FictionPress.com

XxXKristie marieXxX 2007-03-05 ch 1,	abuseGreat poem. Anyone can relate, I love the way you worded this. Keep it up! Kristie Marie
glamorous-giggly-guy 2007-03-04 ch 1,	abuseTo fade away like bliss. Best line ever. Very nice, though I'm not sure about the rhyme scheme? Just seems slightly basic to me -shrug- but don't get me wrong I veryily like the piece. I also like your apparent enjoyment of Ancient Egypt. I am a big fan.
Brinneh 2007-03-04 ch 1,	abuseinteresting last two lines. was the speaker making life miserable for the loved? very good poem, it's very lyrical.