FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Dianna 2008-10-05 ch 16, anon. | abuseGr. RAWR. Why must you leave us with such a cliff hanger for such I long time. My curiousity is so high that... that... |
| rainbabie 2008-06-12 ch 16,  | abuseHello! This story is just soo amusing. It definitely put a grin on my face. I can't help but root for Max. I love it when 2 opposites/enemies get together. I actually would love it if Nicky and Chip got together. It would tie everything up nicely and everybody would have moved on. Anyhow, hope you update soon :) |
| Channah 2008-03-27 ch 16, | abuseAh, such a mean cliffhanger. :) I hope you update soon again!! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next!! PS: Please, please no Chip and Nicky... |
| Channah 2008-03-27 ch 15, | abuseOkay, I think Nicky needs to do some serious grovelling if she wants to be friends with Sabrina agin. I mean, no matter how Sabrina treats her boyfriend, Nicky doesn't know Chip; they're not even friends, but she takes his side over Sabrina's?! I hope Sabrina makes her decision soon... :) |
| Channah 2008-03-27 ch 14, | abuseUi, she's got a crazy family... And she's got to deal with it while she's sick. Wouldn't want to switch places with her... nope. :) Aw, Max wants to date her! I was mentally trying with all my might to make her say "Oh yes, honey-bunny! I love you too!" and throw herself into his arms... but, I guess it didn't work. :P |
| Channah 2008-03-27 ch 13, | abuseOkay, when I read Chip's message, especially the sentence "I’m not mad about the bath robe thing", my impression of him got really bad... And then he's with Nicky instead of maybe going to Sabrina's apartment?! Seriously, I don't think I like him anymore. That's probably why I thought it was so much sweeter that Max was pounding on her door when she came back. At least he's checking up on her instead of whining to others about her... gah, I hope she breaks up with him. Then, I totally loved the scene between Sabrina and Max. And, I'm sorry I have to say this, but I kind of hate Nicky. What kind of friend is she anyway? Even if Chip and Sabrina don't work out (which I hope) I wouldn't like it if she got together with Chip. She didn't even ask how Sabrina was feeling. She sucks royally as a friend. |
| Channah 2008-03-27 ch 12, | abuseLOL It's kind of hard to see why Chip and Max are friends. :) I don't want to sound bitchy or something, but I'm beginning to ask myself if Chip does even honestly care about Sabrina... Maybe I'm over-analising, but he seems more focussed on himself han on anybody else... Well, I'll see, I guess. :) Good chapter though. I found the argument between the two men quite amusing. |
| Channah 2008-03-27 ch 11, | abuseAw, I love Max. Seriously. Chip is nice and kind of funny (though he seems like he's a bit wimpy; but Max is great. The conversation at the end of this chapter was really sweet. It's a great story so far; and don't worry, the story is still light and funny despite Sabrina's dead fiancé. |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-03-26 ch 16, | abuseNice! |
| malloluvsya 2008-03-18 ch 16, | abuseI just found this, and could Max and Sabrina be more perfect for each other? I realy hope you have these two end up together. They make me happy. And this is so hilarious, I find myself laughing really loud through most parts. |
| SoulSam 2008-03-07 ch 16, | abusei love love LOVE this story! read all 16 chapters in one sitting, could not make myself move away from the computer. it's so good, and funny and i love max. :) nicky kind of rubs me the wrong way, and i don't really like the way she's all about chip. i'm sorry, but if my best friend was acting like that, clearly attracted to my boyfriend and comforting him and berating me, i'd probably throw my shoe at her. i sincerely hope nicky and chip don't get together, even though i obviously can't wait for sabrina and max to get it on! *fingers crossed* :) anyways, did i mention i adore this fic? can't wait to read more! |
| Dianna 2008-02-27 ch 16, anon. | abuseomigosh WO i am so happy =) can't wait until the next chapter la. |
| make this mistake 2008-02-22 ch 16, | abuseHmm. Oddly enough, I don't really give a ** what Nicky wants, but I don't want Chip to try and cheat on Sabrina. Although that might make the whole breakup thing easier. I think my favorite character is Andrew. Slightly weird, considering that he's dead and has no lines, but still. I love him. :] |
| mia5081 2008-02-21 ch 16, | abuseAh, I'm glad that Sabrina and her mom worked things out :D Update soon! ~Mia |
| sdnpljj 2008-02-20 ch 16, | abusea verii veri gud chapter! i hope u write the nex one soon! |