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| Moondog Dozier 2007-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI like how the harsh natural imagery ushers in the overall theme. The voice, and the tone of it carry this well, because it is consistent, and identifiable. I can hear the philosophical threads that run through this, and tie it together neatly at the end, with the open ended, often asked question. This leaves the reader room to ask the question of themselves and the society that they reside in. Well written. |
| Redeemed 2007-03-05 ch 1, | abusePeople are evil and selfish by nature. ;( |
| Your Oasis 2007-03-04 ch 1, | abuseVery good...very good...not quite what i expected, a bit harsh but i know the feeling and yes some people are like that. >. |