Definitely the logic of a wolf which is sweet and naive. I loved your poem. It made me smile.

Thanks!

Lolz, what a selfless wolf!

mauhahahahaa...i cant stop laughing at this one! if you look at it one way, it is so funny! but if you look at it the other way. it deliver a very important moral values! love this poem, especially how it rhyme! nice one!

Merry (early) Christmas!

I like the message of the piece because it is very true. I also like the tone, very sing songy or folktalelike; it works well with the piece. The only thing is some of the rhyming sounds a bit off when you used the words with more than one syllables. It just didn't seem to fit with the rest of the rhyming. The other thing is it did get a bit repetitive. Still, all in all it's an interesting piece. I especially like the title. Nice job.

Wouldn't the wolf die from lack of water if it didn't drink from the only available source of water mentioned? It's a nice thought the wolf had to perserve the estuary, but maybe it's a bad thought. The poem's very thought provoking!

I must say that I did indeed enjoy the 'the before-performance activities,' and the show itself as well.

I really like how playful this poem is, but that it can also be seen in a different way. A way that applies to us today. Do we drink on, from that river by the tree, that empties out into the sea? Or do we leave it, so that others may partake?

Silly wolf! XD

But yes, it's very charming and I enjoyed it a lot.

Very amusing. I love the rhyming of the entire poem and the light, almost childlike humour and rhythm to it. Great job!