| Reviews for Depression |
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AeonEye 3/12/07 . chapter 1I know the feeling all too well. You write some incredible Haiku's. |
no.peace.los.angeles 3/11/07 . chapter 1Wow. That really does describe depression to a tee. God, I feel depressed just reading it. It's cold & bare & it's just sad. Man. Good job. Keep writing! :) |
Aquafied 3/9/07 . chapter 1god didnt curse you genetics did i am not sure that will make sense in general but it might if you were looking at the same distorted add at the top of the screen vodka blur sunrises remind me of pictures of communist storm troopers which in turn makes me think of starwars |
JR Gringo 3/7/07 . chapter 1Hey Moondoggy! Such vibrant imagery for a depressing topic! the (lack of) capitalization and puncuation suggest a kind of indifference, which also complements the theme. Good haiku. |
Basara 3/7/07 . chapter 1oh... vodka, well... drinking will work for awhile but it won't keep your trouble unsolved... nice... now where's my beer... *searching in my frigde* lol... |
Dale Christopher 3/4/07 . chapter 1Utterly perfect. Captured the hurt and the remedy so well. |