|Reviews for Manic|
| no.peace.los.angeles 3/15/07 . chapter 1
I like the contrast here, because when I think of carpet rides, I think of really colorful scenes, & then there's "black and white thought explosions," which is a great phrase. Nicely done. Keep writing! :)
| Aquafied 3/10/07 . chapter 1
aladdin is still out there somewhere
| JR Gringo 3/7/07 . chapter 1
me again...long time no see, been away for awhile... It both contrasts and complements the last haiku (Depression). This one is more active, but the colors are more simple. I think of nightime when reading this, too, as opposed to morning in the other haiku. They fit well together though...ties between the titles, especially. Great haiku also.
P.S. - Thanks for the review, they're always appreciated. BTW, is your name from Eureka 7 and if so, can I (please) call you Moondoggy?
| Basara 3/7/07 . chapter 1
insane like visualization... wow...