I'm not entirely sure what "calorie free" means, but overall this makes me want to eat a pair of Twinkies.

I struggle to find criticism in this- the attempt is futile.

Dear lord, this was beautiful.

The joy of twinkies! I loved the analogy and the part about ribs was different. Great Haiku.

very interesting...

thinking about twinkies and ribs makes me feel fat

even though i'm not...

i love ambrosia, good strong words here.

thanks!

interesting analogy...although i'm not sure what you mean by twinkies (thanks for the feedback)

I so love your haiku. They're all so fantastically worded. "Vixen loving ribs" is such a great phrase. I love that. Just great. Keep writing! :)

i'm completely enthralled by this. the words are majestic together, like they were made for each other and the image is mesmerizing. just...lovely.

an oddly funny haiku... hahahaha...

nice...

awesome! paints a perfect picture