Reviews for twin twinkies - FictionPress.com

Kazuki Mishima 2007-07-01 ch 1,	abuseI'm not entirely sure what "calorie free" means, but overall this makes me want to eat a pair of Twinkies.
thestonedfox 2007-05-04 ch 1,	abuseI struggle to find criticism in this- the attempt is futile. Dear lord, this was beautiful.
surrealphobia 2007-04-18 ch 1,	abuseThe joy of twinkies! I loved the analogy and the part about ribs was different. Great Haiku.
e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2007-04-10 ch 1,	abusevery interesting... thinking about twinkies and ribs makes me feel fat even though i'm not... i love ambrosia, good strong words here. thanks!
recycle rhymes 2007-03-24 ch 1,	abuseinteresting analogy...although i'm not sure what you mean by twinkies (thanks for the feedback)
no.peace.los.angeles 2007-03-15 ch 1,	abuseI so love your haiku. They're all so fantastically worded. "Vixen loving ribs" is such a great phrase. I love that. Just great. Keep writing! :)
lackluster 2007-03-12 ch 1,	abusei'm completely enthralled by this. the words are majestic together, like they were made for each other and the image is mesmerizing. just...lovely.
Basara 2007-03-07 ch 1,	abusean oddly funny haiku... hahahaha... nice...
Zero-Sum 2007-03-06 ch 1,	abuseawesome! paints a perfect picture