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Kazuki Mishima
2007-07-01
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abuseI'm not entirely sure what "calorie free" means, but overall this makes me want to eat a pair of Twinkies.
thestonedfox
2007-05-04
ch 1,
abuseI struggle to find criticism in this- the attempt is futile.

Dear lord, this was beautiful.
surrealphobia
2007-04-18
ch 1,
abuseThe joy of twinkies! I loved the analogy and the part about ribs was different. Great Haiku.
e a t i n g . f l o w e r s
2007-04-10
ch 1,
abusevery interesting...
thinking about twinkies and ribs makes me feel fat
even though i'm not...
i love ambrosia, good strong words here.
thanks!
recycle rhymes
2007-03-24
ch 1,
abuseinteresting analogy...although i'm not sure what you mean by twinkies (thanks for the feedback)
no.peace.los.angeles
2007-03-15
ch 1,
abuseI so love your haiku. They're all so fantastically worded. "Vixen loving ribs" is such a great phrase. I love that. Just great. Keep writing! :)
lackluster
2007-03-12
ch 1,
abusei'm completely enthralled by this. the words are majestic together, like they were made for each other and the image is mesmerizing. just...lovely.
Basara
2007-03-07
ch 1,
abusean oddly funny haiku... hahahaha...

nice...
Zero-Sum
2007-03-06
ch 1,
abuseawesome! paints a perfect picture
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