Reviews for The Silliest Thing She Would Do

Mizuki Perry 2007-03-17 ch 3,	Most excellent Barne :D I like your descriptions a whole lot, and the way you write is pretty damn funny :D good to see you writing a new story ;)
rocky19 2007-03-07 ch 2,	Hahaha this is so funny, reminds me a little bit of me, haha apart from the shoe thing, im addicted to buying shoes and have far too many of them.
stacey kiebler 2007-03-07 ch 1,	Wow, this is so good! is this, based on real life? i want to see how this ends out so write the rest real soon, kay?
ironicdeathx 2007-03-05 ch 1,	Awesome story so far. Please, please PLEASE continue it. I love your writing style, and I can tell this story has a lot of potential. I know for the time being you need to explain, but for the rest of the chapters, it would be better to have more dialogue and less explaining. From experience, it seems like readers prefer dialogue over paragraphs and paragraphs of explanation. They'd rather have the explanations flow through-out the story so they can piece it together as opposed to it being shoved in their face. So, long story short: more dialogue please! But apart from that, I clap to the potential of this story.
Da Vinci at Work 2007-03-05 ch 1,	Intersting beginning. Haha. A gray mouse.