that is a REALLY good poem. oh my gosh. you have so much talent. i wish i could do that...

I don't know about radical, but this is certainly interesting. Philosophical, buried in non-human terms. Not exactly sure how to describe it, but as the author, I suppose you know. I especially liked your last two lines. They are very true to how power operates. I enjoyed your rhythm, as well. It hardly ever hitched. Good work, all around.