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| amnesiac-vampire 2007-06-12 ch 18,  | abusepoor poor...aha i got it! devalyn! i think it has a nice ring to it XD yes? no? maybe? sorry, i'm tireds now. great chapter devalyn, the ending was nice. i feel like sleeping too. hope you update soon!! oh and have a great summer break!! |
| amnesiac-vampire 2007-06-12 ch 17, | abuseah-hugs-i know the pain, surgery sucks major arse! mr. lamorte's cool, i finally got the real mr. lamorte and my fantasy mr. lamorte to combine in my head so now i can see him perfectly! |
| amnesiac-vampire 2007-06-12 ch 16, | abuse-cue dramatic music- is it...-drum roll- jack?! heh i guessed him on fanfic too didn't i? yeah, good times good times. hn i have the urge to call you dev. i really do. but i won't...for now >;D my evil winky smily face of doom!! |
| amnesiac-vampire 2007-06-12 ch 15, | abusefood courts, their a conspiracy a conspiracy i say! lol yeah well besides that, great chapter, i always wanted to snowboard, and well this chapter let's me imagine it a bit more clearly n.n |
| amnesiac-vampire 2007-06-12 ch 14, | abuselet's go vamanos, everybody let's go! come on let's get to it, i know that we can do it! where are we going to the ski mountain. where are we going to the ski mountain!! sorry, it's midnight, i get a bit loopier this time around. cool chapter, i'm glad i didn't have a teacher like ms. jefferson. |
| amnesiac-vampire 2007-06-12 ch 13, | abusemassachusetes...it's very far from where i live XD cool chappie i liked the detail on the packing part, it's all visual enhancing XD i've learned bigger words X3 |
| amnesiac-vampire 2007-06-12 ch 12, | abuse-snorts- annorexic **, i love that scene, i really do. sounds like something i would do to someone in my head >XD great chapter devon! |
| amnesiac-vampire 2007-06-12 ch 11, | abuseah i'm so sorry i've been gone for so long! i had to study for test to bring my grades up so i can be on the net and then when i got out from school we went on a road trip to florida and and i'm sorry!! good chapter, devon the little elf and jack the big one XD |
| amnesiac-vampire 2007-05-06 ch 10, | abusei like this chapter, though it's the next or so that i like the best, xmas is the greatest!! hey i've gotta go to sleep (it's 3 am TT__TT) i'll finish reading all the chapters and stories i've missed the next time i'm free enough to get on. i've been studying like mad for the state test, and well now that it's over, my teacher's have given me so many projects it's not even funny DX i'm really sorry devon, but i promise i'll read and review all of you stuff!! |
| amnesiac-vampire 2007-05-06 ch 9, | abusei can't remember if i've asked this or not, but what's nathans? sorry, i like knowing odd things like that so i can randomly go up to someone and say 'did you know that in new jersey, they have food joint called nathan's which sells...' i take pleasure in seeing people stare at me oddly as if i just said that. peoples expressions are priceless, just like all those things at the end of the mastercard comercials xD well kudos on the chapter devon! |
| amnesiac-vampire 2007-05-06 ch 8, | abusehmn i still can't imagine how someone hasn't seen a christmas tree...poor jack...damn i just said poor jack didn't i?! he's a strange character, but i guess he grows on you after awhile. lol i have the biggest urge to call you dev, but i won't, so don't worry devon-chan XD |
| amnesiac-vampire 2007-05-06 ch 7, | abuseOH MY GOD I'M SO SORRY! i've been gone for so long, you're already on chapter 17 or 18 or some really high number like that TT_TT i'm sorry! great chapter devon, i liked the ending, it makes me remember and ask the same questions about some of my friends and ex-friends. keep up the awesome work kay? |
| amnesiac-vampire 2007-04-01 ch 6, | abusepoor devon, that scene still makes me cringe. i could almost feel my arm breaking when i read that. well you did a good job devon, i can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter XD |
| amnesiac-vampire 2007-04-01 ch 5, | abuseeven though football really isn't my thing (athletically challenged) this was still a good chapter, keep up the good work! |
| amnesiac-vampire 2007-04-01 ch 4, | abusecools cools, jack is still weird, and sadly he now reminds me of my little brother...i think it's the non stop talking in the car thing XD |