I really like this. Repetition fit the piece well. And I like the escape you are offering for the person. Interesting piece. Loved it!

Loved this. It really has a nice ring to it, almost like a song. I enjoyed reading it. Write On!

(thanks for putting my story on your favourite's list. This one will make mine.)

Oh wow I love this. It just has this certain quality feeling to it, you've written a gem here.