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| Divine Writer 2007-05-28 ch 1,   | there's a scary movie that's alot like this (well, not really). It's about this girl who was abused as a child by her stepmother and when she gets older, she sets out the find her biological mother...and then kill her. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-03-08 ch 1, | This shows incredible emotion. But please, remember these simple words that get me through each day, "The end will justify the pain it took to get us there." You may feel alone but I am sure you got a zillion of friends by your side. Don't ever think that you have to walk through this world alone. There is a song that is called, "Me and Jesus". The words are simple, "Someone loves you even when you don't think so; don't you know, you've got me and Jesus." I wish I could ease the pain that your poem expresses. I love the poem but I wish you, too, didn't have to go through the pain you do. No one deserves to suffer in any way but without suffering there can't be compassion...At least that's what I was told. If you ever need to speak of anything, you can message me from my profile as well. This is a great piece. Keep up the great work and keep your eyes open for another day. Trust me: There is a time when the pain ends. It just takes time. Just don't let the pain consume you and take you before you have time to live. |
| meaow 2007-03-08 ch 1, | this is very powerful!always be positive, dont hurt yourself! |
| dystynctlidotti 2007-03-05 ch 1, | i like your unpredictable rhymes. Please don't die. |
| Princess-anna57 2007-03-05 ch 1, | Well written. It's really depressing though! :( Always be positive and keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |