This was really nice. I adored the ending: "Watch out!"

I also liked how you used the mask in here, how, by putting it on, you are deceiving the world and hiding your flaws.

"Mask maker, mask maker, give me a mask," is a really nice line. It reminds me of Fiddler On The Roof's "Matchmaker":

"Matchmaker, matchmaker, make me a match."

That's okay, though, because I adore the song. (:

Wow: I really like this. It's really creative. Good work!

I love the stages it goes through, I think that makes it more real.

i like this it reminds me of another poem that u wrote which was also really good.

Maybe it is cause im in a total song mood, but this sounds like it could be a song. I love it though. I have always loved the thought of masks, and how we wear them so easily. Great job.

I really love this. I'm still at the stage where I want the mask tho... Really good job, keep up the great work.

IM