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Sercus Kaynine 2007-03-08 . chapter 4
You know, I think that someone wouldn't really get it if they just read one of these stories because there's an even bigger story behind them all. James is growing up, and it'll be interesting to see what he decides to do with his life. I think Alia made a big impact on him, but it is his life, after all.

Anyway, the story really kept me on my toes. Nice work. :)
Sercus Kaynine 2007-03-06 . chapter 1
Slow down a minute! How do you expect me to keep reviewing these if you write them so fast?! Oh well, I love them anyway, and I'm not complaining about the fast updates...

This one's really interesting. James, what have you gotten yourself into this time?

Anyway, update soon!
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