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| Timothy Stillman 2007-03-15 ch 1,  | abuseAgain, yes! I too hate this damned government. I hate the little ** in the box who stumbles around in a stupor, and his half wit blow your head off for a song vice p. and the torture architect, and all the losers who are now in effect destroying the world. Yes, the previous writers never had it so bad. Stirring and so blood dripped and ink dripped. Writers who turn away who are not brave anymore, who have their pictures taken with George and Laura. The poem screams what I scream also, this is madness. And the depths of death and torture and pain that writers should explore, but ignore. But you do not. We have turned this world are doing so this second in to a graveyard. The world is indeed in a feverish rush--this ** Patriot Act, yes, right, Double speak, and notice today to cover the real news, another fake news story and it's so patently false and so conveniently timed and the newsies cower and say yes master and go along and so do so many people--if poetry is considered something weak and timid this shows the texture, the gutteral scream that this is madness times a million, all these filthy person/things so noble and so moral--what the hell is that? God, and Lunesta might give me a heart attack? Oh no. And then I won't have my empty mind. God, what would Orwell and the other writers think of today? America, you scream, wake up, stop this drunk lurching toward oblivion. Our leader is wasted. Do we have to have his D.T.'s for him. Excellent poem, succinct, rage held in check, logical, and a peon to writers and artists everywhere, keep doing it, rage against the night. There is still value in it. More so now maybe thank ever before. Thanks for inspiring. |
| ohthevoices 2007-03-06 ch 1, | abuseHaha, nice. Too bad it's true. |