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| hipgurl 2008-07-21 ch 25,  | abusei love this story when will they start havinga relationship! its taking too long please post =) |
| Fin of Tsuki 2008-05-09 ch 25, | abuseI love it that you're posting it more often than you used to. Continue please! |
| Radioactive Jeans 2008-05-09 ch 25, | abuseHAHAHAHAHAH! The beginning, was really funny. I love this especially: 'She was certainly not little or old, for her stature equalled that of a fridge...' Where do you get these images? I LOVE THEM! And then there's the ending. Ah. Another jealous bout from our lovely Pen. Don't you worry Pen. You'll get your turn soon. SOON, SOON!~! Oh, and yes. You're most welcome. You deserve all the reviews you can get. I love your story! I really, really enjoyed this chapter! :D :D |
| Radioactive Jeans 2008-04-20 ch 24, | abuseI seriously love Pen's self-depreciating humour. I don't like Samantha. And what's with Cam? ARGH! You're not cool anymore, Cam, you! >:( *you still write wonderfully, it's just Cam. :) |
| Radioactive Jeans 2008-04-20 ch 23, | abuse'He was my knight.' *squeal* I'm so Samantha like, but what the hey, I don't care. He's uberly-freakin' sweet! |
| Radioactive Jeans 2008-04-20 ch 22, | abuse' “Now, Pen, would you rather smell like a Parisian ** or a baby’s arse?” ' ' “Is that before or after a nappy change?” ' *dies of laughter* They're such an eccentric pair! :D :D |
| Radioactive Jeans 2008-04-20 ch 20, | abuseI LOVE THE PASSWORD. I LOVE PEN. I LOVE CAM. I LOVE JEREMY. zOMG, I EVEN LOVE THE HALO KID! WONDERFUL WRITING, I TELLS YA. |
| Radioactive Jeans 2008-04-20 ch 18, | abuseHahahah, oh man. He's quite the witty one, isn't he? He makes Pen speechless! :D :D :D :D 'Gentleman my arse.' That one was what made me laugh. XD |
| Radioactive Jeans 2008-04-20 ch 16, | abuse' “Oh no, not Kumbaya again.” ' *dies* oh man, I know how that feels. It's the worst punishment for your larynx ever. ... and Cameron Hamilton? He oddly reminds me of that t.v. show Maggie and the Ferocious Beast. :D *gives you Starburst* |
| Radioactive Jeans 2008-04-20 ch 11, | abuseHah, so she likes him too! I KNEW IT! Goshdarnit Pen, why didn't you just grab him the first few times he talked to you? ARGH! *ahem* Another awesome chapter. |
| Radioactive Jeans 2008-04-20 ch 7, | abuse'Samantha said over her shoulder as she strutted away, mini-skirt and all. I wouldn’t even call it a mini-skirt. It looks like a loin cloth.' *laughs hysterically* I can totally imagine Samantha in a loin cloth. Awesome, awesome, awesome! YOU'RE FREAKIN' AWESOME! |
| Radioactive Jeans 2008-04-20 ch 6, | abuseWow. Obviously, Cam's quite interested in her! ... or is he? *insert Beethoven piano concerto here* But I really love how this chapter turned out. |
| Radioactive Jeans 2008-04-20 ch 4, | abuseAhh... so Cam isn't what he seems, eh? And Jeremy too, I see. *LOL* I love the 'Yoda talk'. It's really cute! |
| Radioactive Jeans 2008-04-20 ch 2, | abuseLOL. I must admit that I absolutely love your style and your characters' names. I LOVE how Pen is a bit like me. Keep it up! |
| Kat The Great 2008-04-09 ch 23, | abusePlease Please Please post a new chapter PLEASE i've had to wait long enough |