This was funny and enjoyable, but I wish William wasn't so weak.

Cute. Fun. Gory. Whee!

"'Mummy says not to listen to crazy old men!' '...MARISSA!'"

That was my favorite line/conversation.

Even though it jumped around for a little bit, this was still awesome!

hot sweaty man sex is always on thee list

michealangelo is the one who painted the sistine chapel.

This is absolute LOVE

I adore the family dynamics and how Will babbles on and is overly dramatic, are you planning any more in this universe. PRETTY PLEASE .

The beginning of your story really grabbed me and held on. I was really interested throughout the rest of the chapter. However, some minor spell check issues kind of detract from the read, and the frequent scene transitions become kind of hard to follow. You always seem to cut to another scene when some action is about to occur. I think some description is in order so that the reader knows how the characters got to where they are during these scene changes.