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Nemonus 2007-05-11 ch 1,	abuseNice! "itchy, inky fingers"; that's how it feels, doesn't it? I also like "spirals and swoons" to describe text; it's very unique but apt. It does make "chicken scratch" sound stale. I don't think you want the I in "Inky tablecloth" capitalized. Also, the first line might sound better, more alluing, with a comma or something. It's stand-alone-ness makes it a little choppy. Alltogether, good poem. Moments of it are really what writing is.
TragicDreams 2007-04-01 ch 1,	abuseI liked this alot. It was very creative and imaginative. The imagery was good and this was well written. Keep writing!
Inkypink 2007-03-06 ch 1,	abuseHehe, that's cute. I only really clicked on it because of my pen name :) but I'm glad I did! I have a thing abut the word 'ink'. Isn't it such a fun word? "For my itchy, inky fingers."
xDancingintheRainx 2007-03-06 ch 1,	abuseI like this very much. Its beautifully written and well worded. I especially like "Shadows of blue" "A spider's tidy web" and "An Inky tablecloth." Excellent job!