 Pyreflei 2007-03-09 . chapter 1I think this is probably one of the cutest things you've written to date about these characters. I like the part where Michael has to drag Paul upstairs just to get him to sleep for a while, despite the kicking and screaming all the way. The kids just make it better, what with their own small reactions to the jokes and metaphors that their fathers use towards them and each other. Too cute
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