First, let me say, thanks for the review.

I'm only on the fourth chapter so far, but I'm really enjoying this story. I don't typically read war stories, though the Vietnam War particularly fascinates me. This is really captivating so far though. Gritty and dialogue-driven, and paints a really detailed picture of what's going on, without actually describing the entire setting - a tactic that I appreciate. Far too many writers bog their writing down with any excessive amount of adjectives.

Keep it up! I'll review again when I finish.

Wow I couldn't stop reading this. Very realistic and your character development is great. Just a few minor grammar mistakes, as I'm sure you already know, but yeah nothing glaring. Keep up the good work and thanks a lot for the review.

Although I don't have a great interest in war stories, I did enjoy reading what you have so far. However, to offer some creative criticism I suggest that you proofread it over and correct some of the minor mistakes to make it easier to read. For example, in the first chapter you used "won't" instead of "want."