 Elodie Wolfe 2008-04-21 . chapter 4I hope you update this soon, cuz I LOVE it, even if it has been a year.
Middi |
 a bitter kiss. 2007-05-24 . chapter 4I'm not really into the whole IM thing, when it comes to stories. Maybe, you could bold their names so it would stand out from what they're typing, you know? But other than that, this chapter was pleaseant too. :)
I like how you mention the brand names because it makes us think that Zelda and all the other women are part of our own world - though they may be living a more glamorous lifestyle. Also, I love classical music and ballet, so thanks for writing Pacehebel and the The Sleeping Beauty in your story. :) But I think Tchaikovsky's Swan Lake is my favorite. :)
Good story! Keep it up! |
 a bitter kiss. 2007-05-24 . chapter 2Once again, I love those little details of yours! Like, mentioning the liquid ban, and I have a Samsonite suitcase whenever I travel - though we take Singapore Airlines, haha. :D
And yes, the liquid ban is so frustrating! I can so relate to Zelda in her explanation! And I love how you say what her toiletries are, like the sweet pea, orange-mango shower items. I love Bath and Body Works, The Body Shop, and other shops like that, hahaha! They make great Christmas presents!
Frau... the Sound of Music! Haha! |
 a bitter kiss. 2007-05-24 . chapter 1First off, I love all the little details you have that make the story so good. Like, mentioning him pouring a cup of coffee and the English muffins just makes it seem so picture perfect... like they're in their dining room, on a lazy start of the day. :)
I love how the entire story feels so European - from how you mention all the cities, the setting, and even how you write the way she chooses what music to listen to. I want to go to Europe. Me and my friends are saving up for airplane tickets for Europe after we graduate. :)
This was such a ... pleasant beginning. Very calm, relaxed in its mood. :) |
 Kohlomere 2007-04-02 . chapter 4Hey V, it's okay to ask for reviews--cough, cough Court's Jewel cough, cough--see I do it too. Opera fetishes, are limiting you, I fear, but don't listen to me, I've had less than three hours of sleep.
The IMing seems a bit stilted at first, but you seemed to get comfortable with it later on.
I've never understood why tennis bracelets are called such...but the girls sound way too perfect (this is probably the voice of hypocrisy =) ) and they eat way too much crap to wear mini skirts it sounds like (like Usagi from Salior Moon--dear god I'm referring to anime!)
But is it just me or are they inordinately absorbed with men? I don't know, as a part-time feminist and full time cynic, I guess I'm just boring you. Very well, thanks for all the attention, keep it up, E. |
 Kohlomere 2007-04-02 . chapter 3Hey V! I've been bogged down with Julius Caesar crap was updating all my stuff and my brother kept on demanding to get on when I started reading Frivolous. So anyway, I'm so happy to agree that journalism these days is in dire need of improvement. Just can't let go of the opera singer, ehh? Very well, we're all allowed our fetishes. I didn't know you had a thing for Anna Nicole Smih--that's what the whole thing reminds me of. You know I can't remember Mother making that much money as a docent, but then again she didn't work in Washington...But "I'm sure you{'}r{e} lightning in the water." I adored it! I'm so happy I came around and read! |
 London Blaise 2007-03-23 . chapter 2Ha, it took me something like two chapters to adjust to the change in the tone of your dialogue. It's quite a departure from the vintage banter of Raoul! But to my delight, I see that you have maintained all of the literary grace I enjoyed in the 'Opera' series. The plot is an interesting one, and I am already growing very fond of your characters, all for different reasons. Hats off, Vixen! I eagerly anticipate more from this story. |
 Hannah56 2007-03-18 . chapter 3Oh...things are getting interesting! Please update soon! |
 Kohlomere 2007-03-09 . chapter 2Hey V! What's happening? Anyway, they are sickeningly rich. Now I might have known since on your profile you put purple as one of your favorite color that you had, I say this jokingly, delusions of grandeur. Excellent, me too! The grammar was great, only one sentence confused me, "She was given a champagne-colored Mercedes, the emblem of German perfection with the proud ecstasy man embracing excellence on the front." speaking of ectasy, I am so happy that you update! Keep it up, E. |
 Kohlomere 2007-03-06 . chapter 1Hey V! I am so happy to see that you have returned to the living! Okay, I've filled quota for exclamation marks. The beginning is kind of stilted, but maybe I'm just used to your philosophical preludes-where is the next Opera, young lady? So I am too tired to go deep into spell-check (omg THREE majors today-ugghh! Opps.) but check your apostrophes. Anyway, great job, I love Lilo. Keep going-peace out, E. |
 Lady of Confusion 2007-03-06 . chapter 1update soon! |
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