 Isca 2009-05-20 . chapter 1The first and last stanzas compliment each other well--emphasizing the cyclical nature of the poem. |
 OspreyEagle 2009-05-19 . chapter 1Aww how funny lol! :D |
 fleur de l'est 2009-05-01 . chapter 1Lovely imageries in the middle and excellent structure, I loved the way you made the poem a cycle itself. The rhyme seems a bit vague and sometimes having half-rhymes seems more awkward than free-verse, but that's just my personal obsession with rhyming.. Otherwise this is a lovely piece, I can imagine it being sung =)
~fleur |
 simpleplan13 2008-12-06 . chapter 1I like the first and last stanza. The way they work together is really great. I like the rest of it as well. I like the third stanza, the word choices were interesting. |
 Memrat 2008-12-03 . chapter 1Very cute! You'd be perfect for writing a short book of poetry about dogs! |
 multiples of six 2007-04-22 . chapter 1Haha, cute! The line "He seems so familiar somehow" made me giggle. =) And I like how you can take it literally or as a metaphor for so many things. Nicely written! And thanks for the review. =) |
 The Celtic Bard 2007-03-07 . chapter 1You really like dogs don't you? I like the poem! Good flow and all! |
 xSN11 2007-03-06 . chapter 1Wonderful! I enjoy your style of writing. If you're going to write more poems about canines, I'll read them for sure. I'm adding you on my Author Alert list! |
 a silenced revolution 2007-03-06 . chapter 1Good description of that! Funny, well done.
Write on,
~Isabella May |