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Reviews For: Neverending Cycle
Isca 2009-05-20 . chapter 1
The first and last stanzas compliment each other well--emphasizing the cyclical nature of the poem.
OspreyEagle 2009-05-19 . chapter 1
Aww how funny lol! :D
fleur de l'est 2009-05-01 . chapter 1
Lovely imageries in the middle and excellent structure, I loved the way you made the poem a cycle itself. The rhyme seems a bit vague and sometimes having half-rhymes seems more awkward than free-verse, but that's just my personal obsession with rhyming.. Otherwise this is a lovely piece, I can imagine it being sung =)
~fleur
simpleplan13 2008-12-06 . chapter 1
I like the first and last stanza. The way they work together is really great. I like the rest of it as well. I like the third stanza, the word choices were interesting.
Memrat 2008-12-03 . chapter 1
Very cute! You'd be perfect for writing a short book of poetry about dogs!
multiples of six 2007-04-22 . chapter 1
Haha, cute! The line "He seems so familiar somehow" made me giggle. =) And I like how you can take it literally or as a metaphor for so many things. Nicely written! And thanks for the review. =)
The Celtic Bard 2007-03-07 . chapter 1
You really like dogs don't you? I like the poem! Good flow and all!
xSN11 2007-03-06 . chapter 1
Wonderful! I enjoy your style of writing. If you're going to write more poems about canines, I'll read them for sure. I'm adding you on my Author Alert list!
a silenced revolution 2007-03-06 . chapter 1
Good description of that! Funny, well done.

Write on,
~Isabella May
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