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Reviews For: A Sad, Slow Song

Shadow Link
2007-03-07
ch 5,
Wow.

Deap-seated ironic tragedy. I'm a senior myself and, though I'm a guy, it's easy to relate to the story. For such a short piece, it communicates a lot, emotionally.

Also, I liked how you broke things up into smaller chapters. It gave the story a better, broken flow.
maggie
2007-03-06
ch 5,
Oh my God, Kerstyn I love you and hate you at the same time. It felt rushed to begin with, like it should be a short story but instead a book. But the ending. I sort of hate you for that ending as much as I like the story.
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