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| BrdomIsTheDvl 2007-11-18 ch 1, | Adam is SO in love with Mason! xD I love this story! I love all of your stories! The ones I've read, I mean... |
| red-headed psychopaths want... 2007-05-15 ch 1, | I love it! Kawaii (cute)! XD |
| magalina 2007-03-12 ch 1, | The endind was really sweet! I love your one shots. Great job! |
| Emmy 2007-03-12 ch 1, | "I just wanted to scare teh death out of you." I found that line incredibly beautiful, and so fitting, It was meant litterally. Love it. This story was awesome. |
| Khali Draegan 2007-03-11 ch 1, | Yes, of course other people will like it. It seems...alittle out of character for YOU, but then again...maybe not? The crazy dominant characters don't usually change tune like that, but you usually write so that it's up to the reader to decide whether or not they actually went through with whatever crazy thing they're doing to the extent that their conterparts die. So I guess it could be an either-or kind of deal? That's what I see in your writing anyway. I can't speak for anyone else. Maybe I'm just seeing things, being weird, whatever. Point is: I really liked it. It was different and it had your flare for twists at the end. --Wings |
| xXbethXx 2007-03-11 ch 1, | Wow. I love the style and the way you set this story up. VERY nice. I'd deff add it to my fave list if I remembered my email =] |
| the sacred night 2007-03-09 ch 1, | Aww, a happy ending. He wanted to scare him so he wouldn't do it because he needed him... that's sweet, in a kind of twisted way. |
| xanthofile 2007-03-09 ch 1, | i did like the style you used. and the roundabout way they went through everything. as if you can't tell what's the lie and what's just blowing steam, and both of them are just blowing steam for the other person. >< that makes sense in my head, but not so much in writing. oh well. |
| Amindaya 2007-03-08 ch 1, | I love that book! And this story. |
| Sargon 2007-03-08 ch 1, | I love you so much... lalalala life is going terribly for me...sigh fallen in love with an impossible guy and parents are becoming unbearable to me and each other...doubting my friends and just tons of other stuff... miss you zigi |
| Jordan 2007-03-07 ch 1, | 1. My uncles dog that I live with is named Mason. Insane, right? 2."He coughed and his hot, smoke-filled breath barreled into my face. I wondered if the breath of the devil felt and smelled like that. I breathed through my mouth. Did it taste like that?" Ahah. So last night I ended up making out with this guy.. and we'd both been smoking his crappy cigarettes and.. this just reminded me. I was thinking his mouth didnt taste very good and later when I had another cigarette I was like it tasted just like that and realized my mouth probably tasted like that too.. we were high, some pills. 3. Day 4s we had a bunch of free periods together didnt we? I miss you too, darling. Guess who said theyre returning next year? Brian Michelz. Yeah. 4. Cute story, I miss our late night conversations about anything and sometimes things similar to this.. Great job, love. |
| RtotheMAXBABYwtfucks 2007-03-07 ch 1, | LOL THAT'S A NAME I USED TO REVIEW ONCE! THAT'S COOL, MIRITE? KATY. I'LL REFRESH YOUR MEMORY OF WHAT I THOUGHT ABOUT THIS. Chinamagusa Bara (8:37:16 PM): OMG KATY. Chinamagusa Bara (8:37:21 PM): I LOVE THIS FUCKING STORY. Chinamagusa Bara (8:37:27 PM): YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW >:o Chinamagusa Bara (8:37:34 PM): AND YOU NEED TO UN-ONE-SHOT IT! |
| Duzen Broken DreamZ 2007-03-07 ch 1, | I loved this. It was good, dramatic in a good way. I loved it! |
| bansira 2007-03-07 ch 1, | Wow... that was scary! But i loved it |
| Kasee Lara 2007-03-06 ch 1, | I thought he was going to kill him. It was awesome, and scary. But the ending was cute. GOOD JOB! :D |