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| AmorphousHeart 2008-05-13 ch 15, | abuseOMG NO! mew. They need to be together and happy and Macon and Wilson just need to sit down and talk and kiss and...other things. But you're doing a spiff-tastic job so far! So much tension it's killing me. Please update soon! |
| D.H. L'Orange 2008-05-05 ch 2, | abuseupdate time yet? |
| berrin 2008-04-26 ch 15, anon. | abuseOh my gosh. This story is so well written! I swear I was blushing like mad while reading chapter 15. Your writing-style is so unbelievably flawless. Please update soon? I'm seriously praying that you haven't abandoned this story or anything. |
| InspiredByAKiss 2008-04-19 ch 15, | abuseI love Macon. You write his confusion and feelings very well, especially how he feels after the kiss with Wilson. I know you haven't updated in a while, but I hope you find the time to write the next chapter soon! |
| Daedhira Dhna 2008-04-16 ch 15, | abusePlease update! I love this story. |
| D.H. L'Orange 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseupdate... please... |
| princhi1 2008-03-21 ch 15, | abuseAH ARE YOU SERIOUS? YOU STOP IT THERE? AHH YOU ARE SO MEAN! *sob* Love the story though! |
| princhi1 2008-03-21 ch 14, | abuseNo you can't do this! They can't get together now! Ah, I like your story, but sometimes it can be torture!! |
| b 2008-03-16 ch 15, | abuseoh, come on, the trashy part's what's so much fun about it! i really like the tension that's been building up over the last fifteen chapters. dear god you could cut it with a knife. also, lots and lots of sexy. and cute! ^_^; macon-in-denial is absolutely priceless, as is wilson-very-vulnerable. great character development, even if it's just for the two of them. just one gripe, and it's not about your storytelling, really: why are they going to kal? send them to stanford! (esp. 'coz stanford wouldn't rescind your admission just for failing a class, as long as you have a good reason-- like helping your best friend come out!) eh, but i'm biased. XD |
| bluerose24 2008-03-06 ch 15, | abuseI hope that you update soon. I really want to read what happens. |
| bee bee 2008-02-27 ch 15, anon. | abuseit was great. don't worry about it sounding trashy-romancy. the only thing that doesn't sound completely one hundred percent plausible is when macon's shirt comes off, just becuase that seems like it would take more...time/space from wilson/ and give them a chance to stop. or awkward turtle. then again in the heat of the moment... : ]] kepp up the amazing work. |
| Narcotic Affliction 2008-02-12 ch 15, | abuseThe chemistry between the two is absolutely gorgeous to read. I love it. Please update soon! |
| Prince Of Cats 2008-01-30 ch 15, | abuseI have read a lot of kisses/make-out scenes, and I have to say that that basketball scene is in my Top Three for hotness. AGH, THE DRAMA. IT KILLS. (in a good way!) Actually, it's more of the 'Macon, You Idiot, He's Got The Hots For YOU' element of it that's killing me. But I like that Macon's trying to do the right thing and not take advantage of Wilson. |
| Prince Of Cats 2008-01-30 ch 13, | abuseNormally I wait until I've caught up/finished a story to review, but you mentioned Luke Synder in your A/N and I flipped (in a totally happy way, I assure you!). The tie scene kind of screamed Luke & Noah to me, so I was wondering if that was intentional, or if you did that on accident. I'm so hooked on this story now- I can't wait to see what will happen next! I love that Wilson gave Corbin a fat lip- the bastard deserves it! |
| WittyWings 2008-01-23 ch 15, | abuseOk well I'm supposed to be doing an english essay right now, but i got sort of sidetracked. Oh ok so I'm slightly mad a macon, if he feels that strong the little turd, then he should like... DANG it . I SUCK AT RELATIONSHIP ADVICE! :_) oh weLL! ME ENCANTA IT ♥ ~Witty |