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AmorphousHeart
2008-05-13
ch 15,
abuseOMG NO! mew. They need to be together and happy and Macon and Wilson just need to sit down and talk and kiss and...other things. But you're doing a spiff-tastic job so far! So much tension it's killing me. Please update soon!
D.H. L'Orange
2008-05-05
ch 2,
abuseupdate time yet?
berrin
2008-04-26
ch 15, anon.
abuseOh my gosh. This story is so well written! I swear I was blushing like mad while reading chapter 15. Your writing-style is so unbelievably flawless. Please update soon? I'm seriously praying that you haven't abandoned this story or anything.
InspiredByAKiss
2008-04-19
ch 15,
abuseI love Macon. You write his confusion and feelings very well, especially how he feels after the kiss with Wilson.

I know you haven't updated in a while, but I hope you find the time to write the next chapter soon!
Daedhira Dhna
2008-04-16
ch 15,
abusePlease update! I love this story.
D.H. L'Orange
2008-03-23
ch 1,
abuseupdate... please...
princhi1
2008-03-21
ch 15,
abuseAH ARE YOU SERIOUS? YOU STOP IT THERE? AHH YOU ARE SO MEAN! *sob*
Love the story though!
princhi1
2008-03-21
ch 14,
abuseNo you can't do this! They can't get together now!
Ah, I like your story, but sometimes it can be torture!!
b
2008-03-16
ch 15,
abuseoh, come on, the trashy part's what's so much fun about it!

i really like the tension that's been building up over the last fifteen chapters. dear god you could cut it with a knife. also, lots and lots of sexy. and cute! ^_^; macon-in-denial is absolutely priceless, as is wilson-very-vulnerable. great character development, even if it's just for the two of them.

just one gripe, and it's not about your storytelling, really:
why are they going to kal? send them to stanford! (esp. 'coz stanford wouldn't rescind your admission just for failing a class, as long as you have a good reason-- like helping your best friend come out!) eh, but i'm biased. XD
bluerose24
2008-03-06
ch 15,
abuseI hope that you update soon. I really want to read what happens.
bee bee
2008-02-27
ch 15, anon.
abuseit was great. don't worry about it sounding trashy-romancy. the only thing that doesn't sound completely one hundred percent plausible is when macon's shirt comes off, just becuase that seems like it would take more...time/space from wilson/ and give them a chance to stop. or awkward turtle. then again in the heat of the moment... : ]]
kepp up the amazing work.
Narcotic Affliction
2008-02-12
ch 15,
abuseThe chemistry between the two is absolutely gorgeous to read. I love it. Please update soon!
Prince Of Cats
2008-01-30
ch 15,
abuseI have read a lot of kisses/make-out scenes, and I have to say that that basketball scene is in my Top Three for hotness.

AGH, THE DRAMA. IT KILLS. (in a good way!)

Actually, it's more of the 'Macon, You Idiot, He's Got The Hots For YOU' element of it that's killing me. But I like that Macon's trying to do the right thing and not take advantage of Wilson.
Prince Of Cats
2008-01-30
ch 13,
abuseNormally I wait until I've caught up/finished a story to review, but you mentioned Luke Synder in your A/N and I flipped (in a totally happy way, I assure you!).

The tie scene kind of screamed Luke & Noah to me, so I was wondering if that was intentional, or if you did that on accident.

I'm so hooked on this story now- I can't wait to see what will happen next! I love that Wilson gave Corbin a fat lip- the bastard deserves it!
WittyWings
2008-01-23
ch 15,
abuseOk well I'm supposed to be doing an english essay right now, but i got sort of sidetracked. Oh ok so I'm slightly mad a macon, if he feels that strong the little turd, then he should like... DANG it . I SUCK AT RELATIONSHIP ADVICE! :_) oh weLL!

ME ENCANTA IT


~Witty
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