I love how you insert little things with the brackets in this one. It's like you're whispering things to the reader on the side that no one else is supposed to know.

"Each breath I take

Is a nightmare wake"

-I love this line. Just how it sounds and makes me feel...it's just perfect.

Another great song that's headed to my favs list!

That was so sad. That is how loves seems to be most of the time.

SirScott

This is a beautiful, he won't leave your thoughts, poem that I thought was done brilliantly! I love the first and last stanza. The begining and the end of a poem are so important and you seem to nail it every time. And I love the way you continue to say "always last" driving the point home perfectly. Awesome Read!

Well done! Awesome write. Thanks for your kind review. Write on!

first stanza is my fave, & i love the "sun (shine, sunshine)". the format works nicely & i like the idea behind this. On the last line of the first bit though, i think you meant come instead of com? anyway, nicely written. Bex xx