Reviews for Tempting the Tempest

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Twilight Starr 2007-11-03 ch 1,	abuseGood prologue. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~
xDancingintheRainx 2007-08-19 ch 6,	abuseI was really starting to get upset for Arianne because she can't go home, but then when Theoforte said: "Oi! Get up and wipe the Tambling slobber from your nose!" Theoforte chided. "We've all been stuck in this mess, and some of us with bigger problems than you!" I couldn't help but burst out laughing. This chapter really resparked my intrest in the story. It was mysterious and got the reader looking forward to the next chapter, but it also gave the readers a chance to get to know the characters better. Nicely done! Update soon! =)
jesslia 2007-08-19 ch 6,	abusethnks for clearing up everything in this chp! keep writing!
xDancingintheRainx 2007-08-08 ch 5,	abuseYeah... I'm not too sure poking the "king" with a sword was such a magnificent idea after all...hehe. Anyway, I like how this chapter is going. Very interesting and imaginative. Although I got a little nauseous at your description of the king. I'm liking the characters more and more each chapter! And Quess too! ^^ Great chapter! Update soon!
jesslia 2007-08-08 ch 5,	abuseu finally updated...geez...i was beginning to lose hope. but why did she choose to poke the king? and i got a lil confused about Quess was talking about near the end.
Many Chronicles 2007-04-29 ch 4,	abuseI like this! I wonder what the Bunny King looks like?
Van87 2007-04-02 ch 2,	abuseI liked it... My story is in the same C2 and I find it funny the way all the stiries are completly diferent from each other. Keep up the good work.
Frightfully Unaware 2007-03-30 ch 2,	abusewow! this is really good! and i love how you hint to the idea behind the story! i think i may understand as of yet. or at least im hyper and will come back to this w/ a blank mind and scream in confusion. Either way... i enjoy it more than cookies!
jesslia 2007-03-28 ch 4,	abuseyikes...how bad is this bunny king?
jesslia 2007-03-27 ch 1,	abusei like the way you depicted the earth as biased and such...it really does reflect our world today.
xDancingintheRainx 2007-03-25 ch 4,	abuseOoh! I can't wait to read more! Everything is described so well and you painted such a clear image! I've never thought of bunnies to be pink or green before but I really like the idea. I love Theoforte already and I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter! No pressure or anything ;) =)
Ivory Marie 2007-03-25 ch 4,	abuseAgain, you have a lovely use of words. You find a way to meld beautiful words and sentence forms together to create a stimulating peice. However, I do find the plot a little hard to follow. I understand that the peice is abstract. While abstract can be a good thing, to much abstract can get confusing and make it difficult for the reader to clearly follow what is going on. Over all it is still an excellent peice, and as always you grammer is impecable. I wish (and my teachers too) that I had your use of grammer. As always God Bless. -Ivory
Ivory Marie 2007-03-18 ch 3,	abuseI must say that I am impressed with your ability to take a peice that is almost seemingly stream of concious and entwine a plethora of vocabulary well beyond your age, and create an amazing and stimulating peice. I look forward to the next instalment. God Bless. -Ivory
xDancingintheRainx 2007-03-12 ch 3,	abuseRound up those plot bunnies! They need to get working! -Feeds plot bunnies more reviews- This is a beautiful piece. The first part was terribly sad but I liked the next part better. It reminds me of Alice in Wonderland a bit. Your descriptions are lovely and I still wish I had that vocabulary of yours. Excellent work! Update soon please!
Amari 2007-03-12 ch 3,	abuseWell, I really dislike doing this, but as you left it anonymously, I must reply in review. I never really stay on one specific style of writing, unless I need to. grin '"I wasn't sure what you meant by this: "Its face lessened" - lessen means to be reduced or decreased. Is that deliberate?' Yes, its face was contorted of its displeasure with me. It was twisted in emotion, but this lessened as it states I was unintellegent. bows Thank you for the compliment! It makes me want to write more. Now I need to learn to write my ideas down when I get them, lol. Feel free to look at any of my other works. One of them will be included in a chapter later on. With utmost sincerety, remaining Amari

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