you could display a bit more control with your idea presentation, but I really love how it all came together with a kind of sincerity

We aren't all meant for greatness (for what kind of life would that be? no one would be special). But we can all love the heroes/geniuses if we can.

I liked the flow of the poem, it was more of a prose piece.

I liked it, good job.

Beautiful, I totally get this. I feel exactly the same way about someone I know like that. Wonderful job.