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lifesjustbegun
2008-06-03
ch 1,
Tomorrow's Memories,
This one really went home. You have a gift, did you know that? You described all of this very well, "And sure they know pain..." that stanza is perfect because it shows off your intellegence but to explain why might be complicated. Anyway...
~liz
Jordie S.
2007-03-06
ch 1,
I like it. Very true. Nice job!
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