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K. Silence 2007-05-16 ch 24,	Okay i finished your story. i think my first review was a bit harsh. Though, perhaps you should work on the first 3 chapters. After that it seems to flow smoothly, and kept my attention better. It kind of has more of a twilight zone effect to it. Nice job!
K. Silence 2007-05-16 ch 4,	well... this would be good except i'm reminded way too much of groundhog day, that movie in the early 90's. pretty much the same thing. i couldn't get into it because everything repeated itself. even in the movie groundhog day, it's done tastefully and sporadic. maybe i'm being unfair. it couldn't hold my attention... sorry. however, i don't think you should give up writing.
Dellarose 2007-05-08 ch 24,	I loved it. Congrats and thank you. You're wonderful and this is a scary as all hell, great story. Superb! -Madeline
Carmel March 2007-05-08 ch 23,	Whoa. That was an extremely powerful ending. I loved it. This is one of those stories I'll remember for a very long time. Like when you lay down a book, and have that satisfied feeling in your chest. Thank you for writing this, and I hope to see more from you soon! ~carm~
Dellarose 2007-05-06 ch 22,	AAH?! That was scary. Really scary. Definitely good job, but I now have to check that I still have all of my limbs. :) Go you!
Carmel March 2007-05-06 ch 22,	You left it there? A r e y o u k i d d i n g m e? You are the mighty queen of cliffhangers :) This was a fantabulous chapter, and I'm waiting with baited breath for the next one. ~carm~
Carmel March 2007-05-06 ch 21,	A perfect ending to a perfect chapter. Very suspenseful. Now I'm going to be hanging until you update :) I'll give you a...cookie. Yes, I'll give you a cookie if you update soon. I know you want one. ~carm~
Dellarose 2007-05-05 ch 21,	Look at you in the Thriller section. ^_^ Hoorah for zombie(ish?) action! I can't wait for the next chapter. You've truly accomplished something with this story.
Dellarose 2007-04-28 ch 20,	Scary. You can throw Sims out of the window with this one. It was really good. And you know, your story very much belongs in the supernatural category. Sure, it's a category filled with vampires and werewolves and terrible recognition for actual supernatural fiction, but your story is about a boy trapped in a Monday for ten days. That's pretty supernatural. But what do I know? None-the-less, I support your decision and will gladly follow. ^_^
Carmel March 2007-04-28 ch 20,	Day nine! AH! It's getting so close... Brilliant chapter, as always. Everything you write is amazing. Hmm, yes, I guess Thriller would be more appropriate. You could put the main category as Thriller, and the subcategories as Supernatural and Horror...or whatever you choose. I can't wait till the next update! ~carm~
Dellarose 2007-04-27 ch 19,	This reminds me of Sims, like when the game goes haywire and all coherency goes out the window. It's funny and confusing and amusing. ^_^ Closer and closer we come to the Tenth day...
Carmel March 2007-04-27 ch 19,	This is a truly wonderful story :) I like the way you use dialogue; it's realistic and flows naturally. And the storyline is creative, keeps the reader interested throughout the entire read. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more. ~carm~
Dellarose 2007-04-26 ch 18,	Jeez. Larson's a pig. Ha, I suppose he deserves it? Great chapter.
Carmel March 2007-04-26 ch 18,	Fantastic chapter! It was very very action-packed and suspenseful. The tenth day is approaching...:) Can't wait. ~carm~
Carmel March 2007-04-25 ch 17,	Yes, things are getting crazy! Neat chapter. I really liked it. Even though it was kind of short, it was still complete. Super job on this...and update soon! ~carm~

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