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Reviews For: Of Fools and Lilypads

Twilight Starr
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseGood poem. Nice title. Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~
Chidori Nadare
2007-08-09
ch 1,
abuseQuite random, but I think that makes the haiku quite thought-provoking. The format makes it quite hard to read though. Good work, though and thanks for the faves.



-C.N
simpleplan13
2007-03-25
ch 1,
abuseI like that ending a lot... and the title.. great job
Even Gods Dream
2007-03-14
ch 1,
abuseVery nice.
It got sort of chilling towards the end which was interesting.
I like the way you write.
B.S. Ha
2007-03-08
ch 1,
abuseHm...kinda random, but that's okay. The randomness of it gives it the "fool isn't right" feel. That probably doesn't make sense, though...oh, well.
And it seems like you had a rhyme scheme in the beginning, but kind of abandoned it at the end. Maybe this was intentional?
~forestpsych
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