Reviews for Of Fools and Lilypads

Twilight Starr 2008-01-01 ch 1,	abuseGood poem. Nice title. Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~
Chidori Nadare 2007-08-09 ch 1,	abuseQuite random, but I think that makes the haiku quite thought-provoking. The format makes it quite hard to read though. Good work, though and thanks for the faves. -C.N
simpleplan13 2007-03-25 ch 1,	abuseI like that ending a lot... and the title.. great job
Even Gods Dream 2007-03-14 ch 1,	abuseVery nice. It got sort of chilling towards the end which was interesting. I like the way you write.
B.S. Ha 2007-03-08 ch 1,	abuseHm...kinda random, but that's okay. The randomness of it gives it the "fool isn't right" feel. That probably doesn't make sense, though...oh, well. And it seems like you had a rhyme scheme in the beginning, but kind of abandoned it at the end. Maybe this was intentional? ~forestpsych