Good poem. Nice title. Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~

Quite random, but I think that makes the haiku quite thought-provoking. The format makes it quite hard to read though. Good work, though and thanks for the faves.



-C.N

I like that ending a lot... and the title.. great job

Very nice.
It got sort of chilling towards the end which was interesting.
I like the way you write.

Hm...kinda random, but that's okay. The randomness of it gives it the "fool isn't right" feel. That probably doesn't make sense, though...oh, well.
And it seems like you had a rhyme scheme in the beginning, but kind of abandoned it at the end. Maybe this was intentional?
~forestpsych