absolutely love it.

I like how you indirectly tell a story. It's a common theme, but you make it your own. Awesome job; I could read this over and over. I would read this again and give a more in-depth critique if it weren't 2:10 in the morining and I didn't have to fininsh my paper. I'll try to come back and read your other work sometime. Once again, great job.

Wow. Enchanting. This is really good.